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The Deep Worm (6th of the 7DS)
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The Deep Worm (6th of the 7DS) |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
how awful!! This one is certainly intense i love your uses of hard words like cankerous,odorous,devour,it's positively terrible,in a good way. Great writing!! sammi much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Ohhh I like this very descriptive and intense wonderful imagery. Well written. Regards, Olias. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Gluttons "feed on the absolute meat of men and beauty." A very descriptive truth, Mark. Your choices of words and phrasing are excellent. Thanks.  "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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