I put this in the teen place before but i think it fits here better cuz it is dark and i want to see what you guys think of it.....i dont think its done yet but im waiting for the words to describe how i feel it ends too soon!

There is a place between living and dying
A parallel universe

Various people get trapped here
Myself included

They develop  comfort here
Dwelling on the pain that has brought them here

Not wanting to live
Or maybe not knowing how to

Some wishing to be pushed out one way or another

Desiring to be ok again
Praying to die

looking for a way out
But afraid to try

There is only two ways out of a parallel universe
Both seem almost impossible to grasp alone