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This Is But A Dream....
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This Is But A Dream.... |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States 
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I imagine lying with you in a field of flowers... Under the sunshine, The heat from the sun baking our skin. The gentle breeze cooling us. Just lying there in each others arms... We speak no words as they are unneccessary, just the look in the others eyes says what a hundred words could never express. Deep into your eyes I look, All I see is love. I stroke your hands so strong and masculine. The calluses of a working man I feel. I trace the outline of your face, Its strongness makes me weak. I melt into you as I realize, it's your strength that makes me whole. Such a simple realization, but overwhelming just the same. I cannot imagine a life without you, nor would I care to try. I need you so much I try to be strong and shed no tears. Though never touching you is my biggest fear. In my dreams it seems so clear, the more afraid I become, the closer you draw me near. Then reality appears and shows me I am wrong. This is but a dream. "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Excellent poem! I really like this. *~*Amanda*~* |
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coma_dream New Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 6 |
Hey !!! =) I'm new here but it's a really great poem !!! I hope becoming as good as that !!! greetz, Robin |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I wish for you that someday your "dream" comes true |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
AWESOME, SUPERB poetry. The ending was too good. Are you sure this belongs in Dark Passions ?  Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This was really wonderful!  "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i thought this was an great piece.. very good job on the poem.. keep writing   ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Blaec Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 130The Sunshine State |
Great pooem. Sad but beautiful. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wonderful words penned with honest conviction and deep feeling I can identify greatly with your words, much enjoyed, thanks, Regards, Olias. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked this but forgot to add this to my library hehe..bye ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-30-2001).] |
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Dedreia Member
since 2000-07-10
Posts 172Kokomo, Indiana, United States |
I just wanted to thank all of you for your kind words and the nice Welcome Back I have received. I have been away for a time because the words just didn't flow, but now they have come back to me so here I am. You guys are the greatest! Dee "It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I enjoyed this, I too liked the way you ended it! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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