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Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-04-23 10:33 AM

troubled dreams
of nightly themes
demons of the night
try and claim my soul
life fills me with dread
sometimes I even wish I were dead
the pains of this world
surround me and abuse me
I cry out in pain
as I start to bleed out like rain
i wish that all the death would end
I cry over all the agony and fear
so i scream into the night
"help me"

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

1 posted 2001-04-24 01:19 AM

I can really relate to this right now... just wonder why night's demons are afraid to come out in the day time when I'm better equipped to deal ...

nice job

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-04-24 01:26 AM

thoughout provking poetry. Great work. I enjoyedthe following lines.

I cry out in pain
as I start to bleed out like rain

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

3 posted 2001-04-25 08:08 PM

is not qutie sure what its about is it about evil envolping u? well the words and imagery was cool loves ya from me

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

4 posted 2001-06-10 04:00 PM

*grr-it* someone stole my "thought provoking" phrase..n~e~wayz..this one's shortish but it's well written and gets your *sad* point across, bennerz *likes* *hugz*
~Anna *waves*

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

5 posted 2001-06-15 08:30 PM

This was a really spooky sounding poem, full of darkness. But I liked it. Very interesting.

LadyPeach1

Shadowdean
Junior Member

since 2001-06-11

Posts 11
Silver Spring, MD

6 posted 2001-06-15 11:46 PM

demons of the night
try and claim my soul
life fills me with dread
I like that...I would love to see this poem expanded on.....

"Victory can be anticipated, but not assured"

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