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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-04-21 11:55 PM


Time passes by-
Summarily as the wind,
Rumbling through history,
Weeping in your inner mind,

It stops progressing once,
When you depart this place,
That’s when you sense it,
The establishment of the ending.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-24 01:31 PM


hmmm i like this i think i'll put it in the library, it is a very interesting peice!! Have people not read it? There should be more replies,ah well.

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

Xeonox
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2 posted 2001-04-24 04:19 PM


One reply is enough to let me know that someone out their is reading it. I would not mind getting more replies.  

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

dragonpoe
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3 posted 2001-04-24 05:07 PM


Really enjoyed this one. I have read several of yours, and I like your style, abrupt, some what mysterious, and very thought provoking.  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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4 posted 2001-04-24 06:45 PM


great poem !!! =)
it was short, but I liked it...
I admire people who can write short poems, mine are always a lot longer cuz I can't write short ones...it's not in my blood I guess ;-)

thanks for let me reading it !

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5 posted 2001-04-25 11:04 PM


definitely short but sweet ... guess it goes to show sommetimes a few words can have much more impact   nice job!
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