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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2001-04-21 10:40 AM


Dead Heroes and My Silent Romeo

All of my heroes are dead.
They died screaming in my head
as I lay in the darkness
grasping the cold emptiness.

All of my heroes are dead.
Their ghosts dance about my bed
as I watch my sanity
slipping away from me.

All of my heroes are dead.
They rake their cold hands thru my soul
as I claw to hold my silent Romeo
begging him to hold my dyeing pieces, not to go.



"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

[This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 04-21-2001).]

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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
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1 posted 2001-04-21 02:08 PM


Ahh, my friend, you paint a vivid picture of hopelessness. I love your work.

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2001-04-21 05:34 PM


Very nice...James
Swamp¤Faeryie
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since 2000-12-04
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fairyland....of course;)
3 posted 2001-04-21 06:00 PM


i relate to this so much,you've written a very soul-ish and insightful peice,i love it.great work!!

sammi

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

allis4angel
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
Portugal
4 posted 2001-04-21 06:36 PM


Very nice.


a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

5 posted 2001-04-21 06:40 PM


I thank you all for your words and am honored that you enjoyed!
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

coyote
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077

6 posted 2001-04-22 12:56 PM


Sorry, I just couldn't help but think about this quote as I read this piece.  
"When he shall die,
Take him and cut him out in little stars,
And he will make the face of heaven so bright
that all the world will be in love with night."
[Shakespeare,R & J,III,ii]
Great emotional writing, Ali.
Thanks.  

"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty."
coyote

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