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Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

0 posted 2001-04-20 01:37 PM

The sadness a girl feels,
When she has lost her identity,
And when she no longer knows who
Or what she is.

The sadness a girl feels,
When it seems like everyone has left her,
Because she did one wrong thing
To harm herself.

The sadness a girl feels,
When she can't deal with her grades,
And when she stays up
Every night...
Crying.

The sadness a girl feels,
When she thinks she's all alone
And no one understands her or her feelings.

The sadness a girl feels,
When she thinks the world is falling,
And it's all her fault.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

coyote
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

1 posted 2001-04-20 07:14 PM

Marie, my heart goes out to you.

It is not your fault.
You are a beautiful person.
A child of God.
The world will always fall into shadows.
Your place will always be in the sun.
Seek it out, for it will not come to you.
You deserve far better than you give yourself.
Carpe Diem!!!
Each one is precious, as the spiritual gift you were to this temporal world.

"I know that I am like the rain. There but for the grace of you go I."
Paul Simon-Kathy's Song

Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

2 posted 2001-04-21 03:43 AM

very cool i loved it so much but its ok hun God loves you and is there to help you through tough times and he puts ppl and things in your life to make it easier keep it up loves to you

baerlon
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since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

3 posted 2001-04-21 04:10 AM

I might not be female but i felt the wieght you speak of here my first you at school. It has gotten a little better now and i hope it does for you too.

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-04-21 10:47 AM

I understand completely. Writing your feelings out is one way to help. And don't let the other people in your life get you down. You're not to blame for THEIR misconceptions of you. And once a day - SMILE!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-04-23 04:47 PM

the poem itself was great
but what really hope everything turns alright soon..

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Dedreia
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since 2000-07-10

Posts 172
Kokomo, Indiana, United States

6 posted 2001-04-24 08:40 AM

I so understand the challenges of growing up. Just try to remember that when everything and everyone seems to fail you, Hope will never leave.
As for your poetry...I loved it. Keep writing!

"It doesn't matter who you love, or how you love, but that you love" Rod McKuen

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

7 posted 2001-04-24 09:23 AM

This poem is beautiful. It really shows a lot of emotion. Keep writing!

*~*Amanda*~*

*If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!*

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 2001-04-24 10:17 AM

Hugs Marie...

like Poet deVine said...one day at a time...really, I promise that that is what it takes...

K

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

9 posted 2001-04-24 05:11 PM

Dear Marie, every one of your poems wrenches my heart. You put so much depth into them, so much of your own heart and I feel for you. You bring back the feelings I had as a girl growing up, the pain and frustration of not being seen nor heard. And I wish I could just hug you! But also, it helps me see how far along I've come, how I've grown and strengthened, and I hope that you will be able to do the same. Keep writing, it guides you along and empowers you.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

10 posted 2001-05-03 03:32 PM

Thank you dragon. Your words really touch me. It helps to know that you went through similar feelings but got through them and can now look back and see how far you've come..
Thanks for the words. Much appreciated..

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

11 posted 2001-05-08 06:55 PM

Hey,

You know I always got your back

if you every need to talk my ear is free all the time ( you know as someone said " Us techies have no lives") Well ULI and until your next masterpiece ( oh and by the way this poem was superb!!! )

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

12 posted 2001-05-08 10:34 PM

Marie, I know that day by day is how you have to grow, talk to someone, believe me you'll be surprised that they will listen, your poem just has so much sadness, I hope your able to talk to someone, sometimes just talking about it helps.

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