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baerlon
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2001-04-20 03:13 AM

I been busy with school and all and have not writing in a while. I know i am a bit rusty and this feels incomplete but i hope you guys like anyway.

Pharsing

It contains three words
A terrifying sentence that I long to say to you
A terrifying sentence that I never dare say to you
I hold you dear, I hold you near
But everyday I live in fear
Everyday I shed a tear
I watch from afar as your happiness blooms
Never to show you, never to tell the true tunes
I will let my heart ache in the sorrow of solitude
I will live in my cage built by me, around me to protect you
Yet every time you come near
I know I must be weary
With every pass you make
I know my walls nearly break
As much as I pray to God for to let me do so
I know that I can never, must never say so
...

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

1 posted 2001-04-20 07:18 PM

"I will live in my cage built by me, around me to protect you
Yet every time you come near
I know I must be weary
With every pass you make
I know my walls nearly break"

Very interesting read, Baerlon.
Keep them coming.
I have a feeling the rust will give way to a shine.

"I know that I am like the rain. There but for the grace of you go I."
Paul Simon-Kathy's Song

[This message has been edited by coyote (edited 04-20-2001).]

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

2 posted 2001-04-21 04:16 AM

i am forced to agree with coyote it was a great read and i really enjoyed it kep it up and let the light shine

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-04-24 01:28 AM

Awesome poetry. You use those three words as if they were daggers, maybe spwans of hell.
Good work.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-05-23 08:04 PM

~*applauds*~ You did really good. Such emotions expressed

beautiful

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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