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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-04-16 11:21 PM


I've got your number
& I've got hers too
I've called you before
& you know it's true
anytime, anyplace
when you're unaware
I could suddenly call
on a whim or a dare
I could bring up things
that you'd rather forget
or destroy your affair
with her on on a bet
or remind you how once
you used to be mine
that I used to be
your sweet valentine
I could call up your friends
& harass them like hell
perhaps get you fired
from your job as well
remember that next time
you treat me a fool
I've got your number
& I've got hers too...


-Tier


There's absolutely no truth in this poem whatsoever! *chuckles*


© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-04-17 07:25 PM


The truth can indeed be a woman, but I'd hope you wouldn't actually do anything.  The knowledge of the truth you possess should be enough...
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-04-18 11:01 AM


This reminds me of the time I got ahold of my ex wife's boyfriend's number in Argentina and I was trying to call him and it suddenly dawned on me that I would rather not stand in the way of her search for happiness...James
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2001-04-18 06:15 PM


OUCH! Effectivly communicated possible revenge mode here. I like it.  

still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d
I am bound by this, you see...to become Night's sole mistress, and I am jealous in my endeavours for his attention.

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!
4 posted 2001-04-27 06:14 PM


Wow I love the tone in this poem, the language used is amazing and the imagery given off is so vivid.  I loved it so keep up the good work!!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
5 posted 2001-04-27 09:56 PM


Well there may be no truth in this for you, but for me there is.  I had his number and i had hers too.  and her address, i actually spent so many nights sitting across the street watching them.  well anyway too much info.  this poem brought back bad memories, but that isnt a bad thing, i enjoyed reading this  

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Blaec
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 130
The Sunshine State
6 posted 2001-04-29 05:04 PM


I love this.  I always love
the possibility of revenge.
Great poem!

OLIAS
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since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
7 posted 2001-04-29 05:16 PM


A very powerful write, well done, technology can become almost terrifying in the wrong hands, I have an airhorn by my phone for just such an occasion, I enjoyed thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
8 posted 2001-04-29 10:00 PM


Thank you, everyone, for reading and commenting on this poem. It just more or less wrote itself and I never expected to get much attention. Thank you again...

*smiles*

-Tier

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 297
Texas
9 posted 2001-09-10 10:31 PM


Very nice, Tier, very.
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
10 posted 2001-09-11 08:02 PM


Thank you, Topheth, nice of you to say!

*smiles*

~tier

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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East Lansing, MI USA
11 posted 2001-09-11 08:55 PM


how did I miss this one Tier???

great job my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
12 posted 2001-09-15 12:40 PM


Wow--very harsh, but good--I like   LOVE ELMO
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