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Lethe
Junior Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 36
Blackforrest

0 posted 2001-04-16 09:10 AM

BLACK ROSE IMMORTAL

In the name of desperation
I call your name
A lamentation I sigh
Again and again

Spiritual eclipse
The gateways are closed for me to seek

The night...
A veil of stars, watching
My shadow is born from light
The light of the eye, in darkness

Over troubled waters memories soar
Endlessly, searching night and day
The moonlight caresses a lonely hill
With the calmness of a whisper

I wear a naked soul
A blank face in the streaming water
It is cold in here
Frost scar my coat with dust

Eyes attach to your mute portrait
We spoke only through thoughts
Together we gazed, awaited
Hours brought thirst and the rising sun

Sunbirds leave their dark recesses
Shadows gild the archways

Do not turn your face towards me
Confronting me with my loneliness
You are in a forest unknown
The secret orchard
And your voice is vast and achromatic
But still so precious

Lullaby of the crescent moon took you
Mesmerized, its kaleidoscopic face
Granted you a hollow stare
Another soul within the divine herd

I have kept it
The awakenth symbol
Hidden inside the golden shrine
Until we rejoice in the meadow
Of the end
When we both walk the shadows
It will set ablaze and vanish
Black rose immortal

It is getting dark again
Dusk shuffle across the fields
The evening trees moan as if they knew
At night I always dream of you

[This message has been edited by Lethe (edited 04-16-2001).]

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

1 posted 2001-04-16 11:30 AM

As always, I am impressed... looking forward to the next and last.

*smiles*

-Tier

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

2 posted 2001-04-16 01:15 PM

ahhh this is vampiric to me,a little dark and a little strage,i love it,once again you have baffled me.

samantha,from the quagmyre.

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

3 posted 2001-04-17 06:21 PM

This is an amazing poem! Interesting' intruguing and inspiring! Keep working!

^*~Kicking Kim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-19 08:19 PM

I am truly impressed... wow.. this is an amazing poem! Very nice, very nice indeed..

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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