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The night and the silent water (second of five)
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The night and the silent water (second of five) |
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Lethe Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 36Blackforrest |
The Night and the Silent Water And so you left us Jaded and gaunt, some September Wilted with the seasons But hidden inside the delusion I saw you eyes, somewhere Devoid of death The aura poises amidst (the storm) In solid tears I linger A parlour glade, moonlit sorrow Lonely resting pools Relics of the moon-dogged lake Whisper: "All your words are miss given" Am I like them? Those who mourn and turn away Those who would give anything To see you again If only for another second Your face was, like the photograph Painted white We did not speak very often about it What does it matter now? Cloak of autumn shroud I gaze, dim ricochet of stars I reckon it is time for me to leave You sleep in the light Yet the night and the silent water Still so dark... |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
This is beautiful,it reinds me of a poem by poe,a entirely differnt story,but the atmosphere to create with your words is similar. Have you been a member long? I don't recall reading a whole lot of your works,but i love these!! You are very taleted!! sam much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm looking forward to the next installment... -Tier |
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