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Dark Poetry #3

Let me go back

allis4angel
Member

since 2001-04-10

Posts 82
Portugal

0 posted 2001-04-13 05:56 PM

I want to be free
And live like in old days
But you decided to torture me
Not letting me to be free

You must give me a chance
To fly back to my nest
Or became the tree
Where I can rest

I need to find the way back
Be like I was before you came in
But you keep me prisoner
Just because you find it fun

I try to sail back to flat sea
Close to the other candy water fish
But you keep me in muddy waters
So I cannot find the way

You must give me a chance
To find some water to my wounds
Or became the waterfall
Where I can cool the pains

I try to forget you
And strength myself to please you
But you just don’t care
You don’t let me go back

So I keep living in your shadow
Trying not to be stepped on
Unable to run away
Following you with covered eyes

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-04-14 01:14 AM

I think you did a pretty good job. It was a pretty enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing

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