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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
look at me now I hate you I hate you I hate you I dont even know myself Look at what youve done I hate you I hate you I hate you I dont even know what to do every one i see reminds me that everyone i see has problems just like you I cant even handle my self and i have to take me you and them too? I cant do it, if this is life than i cant do it everywhere i turn i see your mistakes i cringe with hatred towards myself i remember all the bad things with every breath i take I cant belive i gave it all to you now there is so much at stake I want to tear you apart i want you to taste your nasty heart because youll never know how i feel God i could kill you foolish to think i could make things better |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
That was amazing. I don't know the background of it but I just got home from a bad day at work and all I could connect that to was my boss and how much I hate him!!!! Thank you for expressing MY feelings as well as yours!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
xEmperorEmber, I am not sure how to respond to this angry write. All I can say is strong prickly poem, if thatwas your intention then you did it well Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Mysteria-Foxx Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 11 |
I think it's funny how people always try to relate to poems that people post. As if they feel proud to say, "been there, done that". Who am I to talk though, I do the same thing. Sorry, thoughts just came to me.Another good poem, Paul. Very angry and emotional. Sooner or later you realize though that the past really doesn't matter. The mistakes really don't matter. Nothing really does. Unless you make it matter...sometime that's good, sometimes you're wasting your time. And your soul. All my love for you. Fox Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean. [This message has been edited by Mysteria-Foxx (edited 04-13-2001).] |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Hate is a paradox of human weakness/strength. We all feel it, we all need to feel it, and have to vent it. Good job of venting. Now, "Get over it." For it must not consume you. "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Interesting... VERY nice piece. Nicely written. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
very interesting as i might follow.... nice job its was a very poem... keep writing  |
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