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0 posted 2002-02-03 01:11 AM



My mind breathes in the past,
Hoping to gulp an air of sincerity,
By the passion it was filled,
As if the chariot rider was genuinely,
To this stream of breeze,
Which flows between lost hope and dreams,
Reminds one of the cyclic pattern,
Which resembles the future within the past,
Sometimes the coldnesscreep’s in,
Feeling that hope has invited starvation,
Amongst the hall of fame ,
If declines the offer to be remembered.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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1 posted 2002-02-04 10:02 AM


Great post Xeonox. I breathe in the past every once in a while as well..

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2 posted 2002-02-04 10:24 PM


I thank you very much for your response.

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