Sing Now Thy Idle Song (4th of the 7DS)

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Sing Now Thy Idle Song (4th of the 7DS)

ma miller
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2001-04-12 09:41 AM

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

1 posted 2001-04-12 07:09 PM

Idle hands do the Devil's work.
Most excellent form and smoothness.
The flow of words is concise and weighted with secondary meaning.
As always, great comparative analogies here.
Thanks, Mark.

"I hate quotes, they suck!"
I.G. Norance

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-04-13 01:24 AM

I love this seven Deadly sins series., they are all so smooth and truthful.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

3 posted 2001-04-13 11:48 PM

smooth and perfect,it seems you have again saved my favorite lines for the very last,this is a GREAT series!!

samantha

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2001-04-15 07:56 PM

I don't have any darts to throw

I really liked this...

(one thing, not really a dart lol...was 'unaction' intentional or should it be 'inaction'?)

K

All obscurity starts with a danger:
Your dangers are many. I
Cannot look much but your form suffers
Some strange injury
Sylvia Plath

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 04-15-2001).]

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

5 posted 2001-04-27 08:34 AM

thanks again to all above ... been a while since i've been able to post here (PC problems) ... thanks for reading and appreciating ... Severn, "unaction" was intentional ... thanks again.

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