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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
I gaze into the eyes of the person before me only for a second before I am trapped like a victim to prey The look that seeps into me and thrusts its vision throughout me So deep and full, the pressure of the second sight makes its way within me and forces the trash from my body to exit by way of the pores provided by my flesh Reading every fault of a tired worn and jaded soul, has I stand there helplessly engulfed in an vain attempt to capture one last breath My eyes rupture with intensity stronger than the light of God at the realization that is pressed upon me And all my dreams fall the the floor hopelessly like paper thin imported china My muscles thrust themselves into immediate atrophy only loosened so i can fall to the floor Where i belong My veins tear through my skin and i bleed my black poison in a puddle that surrounds me Fatigued, i pull myself off the floor I restructure myself in a way that resembles film in reverse, as if it were all a clip from a poorly acted, over dramatic Film Carefully checking that I returned all of my waste to my sludge factory I check for reassurance that my last shred of sanity still remains intact and when i am sure that i still have it I regain my posture and go back to looking in the mirror in front of me Feeling the coldness of the tile below my feet in the lonely bathroom Making an attempt to decipher if my heart is colder then the tile drops me back on The floor, i repeat the process |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Making an attempt to decipher if my heart is colder then the tile drops me back on Great line. This is a preety awesome poem. What do you mean by black poision?  Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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Mysteria-Foxx Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 11 |
When he says black poison he simply means all the evil, rage, dark, and pained emotions lurking through his system. Like getting rid of the thing possessing you. Am I right, Paul? I really like this one. I saw so much in these words... Fox Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean. [This message has been edited by Mysteria-Foxx (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very good write here. Very dark and raw and painful. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
interesting and VERY good!! VERY GOOD!! sam much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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