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My Angered Skin (3rd of the 7DS)
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My Angered Skin (3rd of the 7DS) |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
another good one....the part i find most interesting is "harsh hands upon soft and meekly things". Now i wanna know if you actually mean to put meekly,at first i thought oop he made a typo but as i read it a second time i really like it that way,it's really kinda cool!! much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Swamp¤Faeryie ... hello, and yes, "meekly" was purely intentional ... many of my lighter pieces have unwords tucked away in them and sometimes that habit leaks over into the dark side ... thanks again for taking the time to read ... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
M.A. Miller, I like your unwords and your real words as well, as for the way you string them together...pearlescent globules of magic. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Very good read, Mark. I felt the pain. You described it exquisitely. Anger is very much like this, unless you can vent it somehow. Excellent work. Thanks.  "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
i have never understood why a poet is not licenses to invent new words,i'm glad you are breaking that rule,i love it,it give this work so uch more originality!! |
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