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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
Murky are the waters we tread While below slink denizens of the abyss Waiting to swallow whole our very essence Engulf our aspirations Drag us deeper And deeper Into the depths of darkness To drown us In the hopelessness of fate lost in thought, found in words. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Good ride into despair, wandering. But fight it with your instinct for self-preservation. Known in other circles as the "killer" instinct. Honor thyself, and kill the demons. A good read. I really like its brevity and imagery.  "I hate quotes, they suck!" I.G. Norance [This message has been edited by coyote (edited 04-09-2001).] |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
The water is murkier than you can imagine,from the surface you see only a mirrored image.It's much worse underneath. I loved your poem,it's short ut in those few words you seem to say alot. bravo samantha¤ much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson |
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