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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Nobody knows this soul, Nor knows these dreams, They see what they WANT to see, But things aren't always as they seem. A sort after personality? By those more lost than myself? A true heart? No lies or secrets hidden on the shelf. One to pity, Perhaps they do, One to rely on, When things get the better of you. Nobody knows this fear, The feelings of inadequacy, The unfulfilled reality, That everyone calls me. Feeling uneeded, Just like an actor playing a part, Secretly waiting for the next hammer to fall, No one really sees into this heart. All relationships are illusion, A way to pass the time, Forgetten by them when things improve, One more criminal doing their time. Which are you? Victim or criminal? This victim senses, The truth and the subliminal. *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Very good questions again, Isis. Although self-analysis is quite difficult, I'd say I'm probably a victim most of the time. (Which might very well be a criminal statement) lol Thanks.  "I hate quotes, they suck!" |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Hello Isis. "They see what they WANT to see" Yes, I agree. And yes, very difficult questions to answer. I'd say we're all probably a little of both. Good work. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I would say that most relationships are temporary and some develop into a closer relationship...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm sure that someone knows your soul my friend. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Isis, good poem, searching questions *HuGS* I think I'm a vicitim but maybe I'm a victim/prepetrator, which is the same as a victim criminal. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Certainly a difficult question to answer, I'd say I'm the victim in this scenario LOL Glad it got you guys thinking, thanks for reading.. Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"Nobody knows this soul, Nor knows these dreams, They see what they WANT to see, But things aren't always as they seem." That is so true. Beautiful job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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