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0 posted 2001-04-08 03:39 PM


Pen of persuasion jots my deepest wishes,
The ink that it is clogged with
Runs from the devils own veins,

Shredding the skinless paper,
Marking the ancient ruins,
And changing the rainy fluids,

The ink leaching  red,
Expressing its rightful place,
Fitting the devil’s taste.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-08 06:19 PM


"The ink leaching red
expressing it's rightful place,
fitting the devil's taste"
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A powerful to the point poem, very well expressed!

Take care,
Melissa~

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2 posted 2001-04-09 08:24 PM


His persuasions and faces are many,
the pen is only one of his tools.
To beware.
Very real poem, I liked it.
Thanks.  

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3 posted 2001-04-09 09:35 PM


"The ink that it is clogged with
Runs from the devils own veins,"

This is a beautiful poem..
Keep posting.. I want to read more..

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul."  --Emily Dickinson

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