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Look Down (Possible Repost. Sorry about this)
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Look Down (Possible Repost. Sorry about this) |
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Skoota Junior Member
since 2000-12-23
Posts 28Australia |
A word of warning, this (as the header states) is a possible repost from Dark Passion 2. I don't actually remember posting it, but my memory does fail me. Anyway, enjoy. And no, I am not suicidal Look Down I look down at my feet Trying to avoid their eyes. Hiding away in dark corners, Pretending not to cry. I always feel sorry, Not for others, for myself. I'm in a state of depression With lack of mental health. I'm considering killing myself But I don't want to die. But it seems to me, My only option Can be suicide. Depression can drive a man To things he shouldn't do; Like Dope and Speed and Ecstasy, Which ends up hurting you. I'm locked away, deep in my mind I'm crazy as can be. I'm sorry for all I've done I truly am, you see. If I could have a choice Of never living, not at all I'd take it quick, right in a flash And that would end it all. Come to me |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Skoota, thanks for posting this; repost or not it's a thoughtful piece. I liked it the hopelessness of depression clearly came through. Be well in hell Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Adamly Junior Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 11Canada |
This is a nice piece. But not my kind of taste. Tahnks In life things come and go. Live and die. Prosper and fall. But our love and poetry will always carry on. |
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