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Dark Poetry #3

The Hanging Tree

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

0 posted 2001-04-02 11:08 AM

My soul is swaying
in the wind.
Dancing freely
in the shadows of sin,
turning franticly
in the musty breeze,
couching
and choaking
as I freeze.
Wrapped in barbed twine,
soffocating
and dieing
as it sways
from the Hanging Tree
begging for death
to set me free.

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

1 posted 2001-04-02 01:58 PM

this is a masterpeice!! i love the whole symbolism and metaphor,you've done a grand job with your words,beautifuly twisted

sammi

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-04-02 04:31 PM

Great job. I'm new in Dark Passions, so I haven't read many of everyone's works, but I can't wait to read more from you. Very nicely done.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

mc
Member

since 1999-11-16

Posts 67
México

3 posted 2001-04-02 09:03 PM

Great performance, I actually felt myself in the whole picture.
looking foward for more!!!

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

4 posted 2001-04-03 03:46 PM

Very nice! Loved the whole image and feel of this one.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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