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Dark Poetry #3

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robin-shep
Junior Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 28
northern California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-31 06:17 PM

Hi Robert.

Under PIP's copyright laws, posting another's poem isn't permitted.

Please read the email I sent you which explains this in more depth.

Thanks for your understanding..

Severn

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-04-01 09:04 AM

Charles, powerful poem but a couple of small errors , you spell embrace just so and enternal should be spelt without the first "n" otherwise a good poem.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

2 posted 2001-04-02 11:13 AM

I found this a wonderful morning read!! I have been away for some time now and this is the first poem that I picked to read.....reminded me just how much I miss the darkness here.
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-04-16 01:06 AM

Charles is very talented. It is a very expressive poem...short and sweet...perfect =o)

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-04-17 02:25 AM

nice job on this.thanks for the great read..keep writing

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

5 posted 2001-04-17 09:25 AM

"At the shoulder of demons I cry"
This is a great line because it shows 2 meanings, fear and comfort. The fear is of the demns and this is the reason you cry but it explains how he feels comfort with them because he cries on their shoulder. This is an excellent poem and its a real eye opener!

Truly appreciative
^*~Kicking Kim~*^

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