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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-03-31 04:22 PM


Destination Unknown

A pulsating mobile object is hurling thru time and space
unaware of a destination and feeling out of place.
An explosion is imminent or a collision might occur.
Anything is possible and everything is sure.
I have experienced an earthquake and a bright orange lava flow.
Perhaps a tsunami will take out Hawaii as a hot forest fire burns wildly out of control.
I knew this object well til she ripped it from my chest
or did I freely give it to her thinking my heart knew what was best.
Now the center of my universe has left me all alone
to go haphazardly hurling thru time and space
with a destination unknown.

Jameslee@March31,2001

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-03-31 05:44 PM


James,
well written.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814

2 posted 2001-04-01 01:56 AM


Interesting image.  Good work.
mc
Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
3 posted 2001-04-01 03:36 AM


Destination unknown... don't we all feel like that at least once in life?  There's always a meaning to it all just be patient and enjoy the ride.
I liked it!!!

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
4 posted 2001-04-01 06:14 PM


I like..I LOVE..geesh...the images. Wonderful.  

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
5 posted 2001-04-02 09:07 PM


Nicely done here. I truly enjoyed this poem a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
6 posted 2001-04-03 03:44 PM


Bravo bravo *stops clapping so as to type*
This was great!

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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