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Your Presence |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
While I sit numb confused and unwanting I see your reflection in my soul; I can feel you, your words I carry them within myself I'm impregnated with your essence I could not take you away, you are here to stay and I surrender to your melody Will I see you again Face to Face? will you take me again will we ever go back to our precious park? I will go on, with your emblem with your teachings only your memory to go on... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
mc, good strong poem, I like the note of hope at the end. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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mc Member
since 1999-11-16
Posts 67México |
Thank you for reading it, it really encourages me to receive this kind of compliments. |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
wonderful poem. keep it up. P.L.U.R. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sweetie! You're back! How are you???? It's been a very long time since you have been here in the forums...wow...what a surprise to see your name... hugs, hope everything is ok... if you need to talk you know where I am right? Oh and by the way - nice poem my friend..  K |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very powerful poem. Nicely done. I hope to read more. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
All through our lives we meet people who teach us or give us something. This is a great expression of that.  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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