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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-30 12:11 PM


Thoughts can be short
And thoughts can be long
Thoughts can be weak
And thoughts can be strong
Thoughts can be anything
You want them to be
Thoughts can be you
And thoughts can be me

Thoughts can be hot
And thoughts can be cold
Thoughts can be bought
And thoughts can be sold
Thoughts can be shared
With the whole world for free
Thoughts can be you
And thoughts can be me

Thoughts can be clear
And thoughts can be vague
Thoughts can spread fear
Like a new modern plague
Thoughts can be all
That your mind's eye can see
Thoughts can be you
And thoughts can be me

Thoughts can be day
And thoughts can be night
Thoughts can be darkness
And thoughts can be light
Thoughts can be all
Of the love I've for thee
Thoughts can be you
And thoughts can be me

G.  A. Webb

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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mc
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 67
México
1 posted 2001-03-30 02:41 AM


Thoughts are exactly what YOU are, what we all are!!!! they are what we become and are as important as breathing is.
very nice!!

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
2 posted 2001-03-30 03:14 PM


great write! I love the lines "Thoughts can be you; Thoughts can be me"

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Kethry
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3 posted 2001-03-30 04:55 PM


I'm thinking this is a good poem with a nice flow, but these are just my thoughts.  
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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4 posted 2001-03-31 04:33 PM


Great read.  Thanks for the read.

--Marie

It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives.

G. A. Webb
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Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2001-04-02 08:43 PM


Thank you all. I kinda had fun play'n with these "thoughts"...hehe!

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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