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Dark Poetry #3

Pandora's Box

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-03-29 11:45 PM

I opened the old box,
To capture the memories,
The past crept in,
Leaving my senses ever so keen,

With a gentle touch
I untangle the mess,
Now that I see it,
I should’ve left it blessed,

Sensing with my hand,
I tried evoking my memories,
But the dust settled in creating a fog,
Erasing any untouched stories,

To capture the memories,
One must leave the box closed,
For when it is exposed,
You will feel a closing remorse.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

[This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 03-30-2001).]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-03-30 05:04 PM

Interesting message Xenox, you might want to look at the rhyming scheme as it takes away from the impact of the poem.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-03-30 09:30 PM

What do you mean by the rhyming part?

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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