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mirror man
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 814


0 posted 2001-03-28 03:39 AM








not in love


There's no other way to say this
but just to say it is:
she's leaving.

It's very hard to say.
I don't see how so many
can write it out
as if it were just words.




I'm not in love.
Love doesn't hurt.

copyright 2001




[This message has been edited by mirror man (edited 03-28-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 mirror man - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-03-28 06:25 AM


Mirror Man, good response to not being in love.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2001-03-28 08:16 AM


Yeah, right  

~ Tara ~

PS: Excellent piece  

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Katherine Chandler
Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280
Florida, USA
3 posted 2001-03-28 11:34 AM


mirror man, I'm not so convinced as some might be, but I loved the poem and your response.   Kate

Blessings

Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
T S Eliot

mirror man
Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814

4 posted 2001-03-28 06:10 PM


Thank you all, and any who may reply after.  But this one is too hard to comment on right now.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2001-03-30 02:06 AM


When I write it out it helps me understand myself and feel better concerning the situation...James
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 2001-03-30 02:09 AM


Can't find the words here...words I think are not what you need...

my sympathies..

K

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