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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
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Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-26 12:45 PM


He takes for granted  and abuses that which I covet
Powerless I am to stop this
For destiny must take it's course
Yet I love her like no other
Armed with this knowledge I can only sigh and weep alone
Then I pray
That one day
She will fall into the arms that she was meant to be in…
Mine

G. A. Webb


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

[This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 03-27-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri
1 posted 2001-03-27 12:11 PM


You write this sadness so well.
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
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2 posted 2001-03-27 05:41 AM


to the author...whether your truth or the truth of your fiction..I would say don't give up. I enjoyed this.

In the worst of times, let me drift beneath the cloak of Oblivion. I favor the night as it favors me.

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
3 posted 2001-03-27 03:44 PM


How great a poem! strong and full of emotion, yet expressed so simply. A true poem, in every way.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2001-03-27 06:55 PM


You know what I pray hon? For you to be free of this burden one way or another.. with or without her, I just want to see you free again..  *hugs*
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



G. A. Webb
Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA
5 posted 2001-03-28 12:25 PM


Thank you all so much. This is an old piece. I actually wrote it 2 years ago. A picture of the past if you will. Thank you all again, I'm glad you liked it.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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