Dark Poetry #3 |
Mine |
G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
He takes for granted and abuses that which I covet Powerless I am to stop this For destiny must take it's course Yet I love her like no other Armed with this knowledge I can only sigh and weep alone Then I pray That one day She will fall into the arms that she was meant to be in… Mine G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't [This message has been edited by G. A. Webb (edited 03-27-2001).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You write this sadness so well. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
to the author...whether your truth or the truth of your fiction..I would say don't give up. I enjoyed this. In the worst of times, let me drift beneath the cloak of Oblivion. I favor the night as it favors me. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
How great a poem! strong and full of emotion, yet expressed so simply. A true poem, in every way. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You know what I pray hon? For you to be free of this burden one way or another.. with or without her, I just want to see you free again.. *hugs* Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Thank you all so much. This is an old piece. I actually wrote it 2 years ago. A picture of the past if you will. Thank you all again, I'm glad you liked it. G Regret not that which you have done, |
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