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wandering
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since 2001-01-21
Posts 92


0 posted 2001-03-25 08:45 PM


Forever it seems
I await you
Forever dreaming
Of your eyes
Forever longing
For your touch
My heart has waited
Patiently
Quietly
Hopefully
And if I cannot hold you
I will be satisfied
Just to gaze
Within your eyes
Lose myself
Completely
Within you
And still be
Forever yours

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

© Copyright 2001 Ron Fox - All Rights Reserved
just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
1 posted 2001-03-25 11:10 PM


that is so beautiful and i completely understand the feeling
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-03-26 04:53 PM


Enjoyed reading your poem...James
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

3 posted 2001-03-28 07:58 AM


Hi  

I loved this poem... the beginning hooked me - oh, and the end!


Lose myself
Completely
Within you
And still be
Forever yours
Terrific     Take care!

~ Tara ~


may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

[This message has been edited by taramw (edited 03-28-2001).]

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