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A boy who loved
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A boy who loved |
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Feudal New Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1 |
A boy sits alone A boy lays alone A boy walks alone A boy cries alone A boy falls in love With a girl, a pretty dove A boy aches alone A boy carries on A boy loves alone A boy lives alone A boy hopes alone A boy dies alone |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You've written the basic love story here - boy meets girl, boy loses girl..then there is the twist, usually boy gets girl back. Welcome to the family. Make yourself at home, read and write - and check your email for a special greeting.  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome indeed! Great piece, though I believe no one boy or girl need die alone, it is always up to us to make the myths, the legends, the friends and the family.... Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* |
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