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Dark Poetry #3

Disappointment

AWood0813
Junior Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 21

0 posted 2001-03-23 02:42 AM

I live my life for disappointment
feeling trapped on my endless cicle
forever wishing once;
broken thy pattern be,
all while deeper and darker
each new shining moment becomes
when only held each morning
my heart up to the rising sun
to watch it set on me.

AWood0813 "Sad and confused"

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

1 posted 2001-03-24 02:17 AM

What a wonderful form. The way you chose your words displayed the confusion gave me a feel of sadness. I'm sorry that you seem to be in a funk. The only thing I can offer is my shoulder to lean on and myself to listen. Thank you for posting.
It will get better I promise!!
Chez

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-03-25 04:32 AM

powerful poem, confused and concise in the one breath.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2001-03-25 06:17 PM

The sun sets on us all, on our woes, hopes and fears... BUT a new day soon dawns and with it new hope for new love and new happiness.
Wonderful write hon!
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

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