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Unending love |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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I will never stop, Even when the sun burns out, And the doves cannot fly, And the children no longer play. It will never lessen, Even after my lungs cease to breath, And my heart refuses to keep going, And my brain becomes idle. Ever since the first kiss, Heaven has surrounded me, My love for you will never die, It only expands with each passing hour. "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Jean, this is a very passionate piece of writing... loving it!  K |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
Very beautiful piece here.. Well done! Temptress*Moon
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I would say you have it bad...I feel this way about Michelle but I know I can only share my love if she is willing...James |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I thought I did. I don't know how true this really is... Thanks for your replies. Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Jenn... very well done.... : ) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very interesting that this came back up and I noticed that I wrote a comment about my ex girlfriend Michelle...I tried as hard as I could but she just turned off on me...and it does take two or it will not work out no matter how strong the love is on the other side...believe me...one sided love is only a waste of time...that is the lesson learned...fortunately I am with my new girlfriend now and she is a loving and a giving woman...James |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Fascinating. A good examination of love. Good use of hyperbole. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow! This one's back huh? It's kind of funny to look back on the things I used to think were true...heh... thank you for your replies everyone jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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iczed New Member
since 2002-05-18
Posts 1NB, Texas |
On the contrary, my passion for an ex girlfriend has not only inspired me to write more, but has enhanced my perception of what true love is, and how I may better achieve it. If you love someone, there is no changing it, it is not a waste of time. Although it may be one sided, you are nothing but a failure in giving in to grief. If another love is meant to be, let it come to you, but making your current love halt only because it is one sided seems absurd to me. It is though, just my humble opinion. By the way, nice to meet you all. This is my first day here. [This message has been edited by iczed (05-18-2002 11:01 PM).] |
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