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0 posted 2001-03-21 01:59 AM


Sublime time
Tending the crime
Heeding the rhyme
From the lions thyme

Shedding a pause
disregarding the cause
Souls plummeting like jaws
Not abiding the laws,

Needless to defend,
For it is amend
Not presenting a hand,
So it draws closer to an end.

Ronil (Inspiration for my poems is all around me for my muse is my reality.)

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1 posted 2001-03-21 11:59 AM


This has some interesting stuff in it....the whole thing is just pretty interesting, its kinda playful and rhythmic,i like it!!

swamp

much madness is divinest sense,and much sense the starkest madness~Emily Dickinson

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