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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
sure i will love you just give me a minute my life has a plan i'll pencil you in it i swept her off her feet i was told it was the thing to do she broke her leg in three places i broke my heart in two i realised then i need the metaphor keeps me warm at night need the fuzzy unreality steers the rudder right |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
...sometimes I too feel like poetry is the real love, from the perspective that it fulfills a need in us which human relationships may not. I loved this: "i swept her off her feet i was told it was the thing to do she broke her leg in three places i broke my heart in two" Jellybean King |
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silentsky Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 114 |
i really liked this. its very good. it expresses something we are both quite familiar with so well. just what i needed to read this evening. its gentle too. not harsh. i like it very much, very much indeed. shira |
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