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wandering
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0 posted 2001-03-15 08:35 PM


Vibrant is the moment,
As she dazzles my memory,
Unlocking secret desires,
With her brilliance.
Radiant is her presence,
Blinding me,
Consuming me,
In white light.
Painlessly in love,
And muted,
I gasp,
Unsure for words.
My heart stutters,
Between skipped beats,
Screaming out passions,
Never to be heard,
In the deafening silence,
Of my dream.



lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

© Copyright 2001 Ron Fox - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-03-15 08:42 PM


DREAMS ARE THE ESENCE OF PASSION.DREAMS ARE THE GATE TO THE SOUL,AT LEAST THIS THUG THINKS SO.BUT WHO SAYS I AM THE ONE THAT KNOWS.
Jenn Cirrincione
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2 posted 2001-03-16 04:31 PM


Wow.. this was really expressive. I hope you get what you're searching for.

Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-03-16 04:33 PM


Wonderful poem...James
taramw
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4 posted 2001-03-18 03:49 AM


Superb! Liked how you wrote this.

~ Tara ~

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

ilph
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since 2000-07-28
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5 posted 2001-03-19 05:44 AM



upon waking the dream so sweet becomes a nightmare of loneliness

i can feel this one

nicely put

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