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Dark Poetry #3

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ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2001-03-15 01:48 PM

Jellybean King
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

1 posted 2001-03-15 05:12 PM

This was utterly fantastic...words and visuals..starting out slow...evolving into oratory..then...climaxing in the end. Wonderful imagery and visual presentation.

Jellybean King

ChibiDeathscythe
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 128

2 posted 2001-03-15 06:30 PM

now that was just stunning. I don't know what to say, it really struck me. fantastic piece!

if you dont mind this is going on my desktop as wallpaper. hee.

[This message has been edited by ChibiDeathscythe (edited 03-15-2001).]

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 2001-03-15 07:02 PM

Impressive...great layout...

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

4 posted 2001-03-20 10:37 AM

thanks for reading and appreciating ...

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

5 posted 2001-03-20 07:12 PM

Hey ma, I like your work!
The "Toten Kopf" speaks a universal language from its "zone".

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-03-23 08:39 PM

Wow! Impressive presentation, amazing poem!~

Take care,
Melissa~

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

7 posted 2001-03-24 02:19 AM

I have to echo Jellybean King. I don't honestly think I've ever read such cutting sharp emotion. Ma Miller, your skill and talent are outstanding. I shall save this to reflect upon many times.

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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