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G. A. Webb
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since 2000-01-21
Posts 441
Stanton, California, USA

0 posted 2001-03-14 03:12 PM


As I watch the world go by
I wonder with a sigh
What brings these tears
I’ve cried for years
But silence is my reply

‘Cause no one is aware
And fewer even care
For thoughts so deep
Or tears I weep
Which leave me cold and bare

For I fear it’s far too late
To change what now’s my fate
I broke the rules
And shunned the schools
That teach one to relate

See I chose a lonely road
For all the seeds I sowed
And took great care
For strangers there
Yet still no love they showed

So I will question why
My soul love will deny
I’ll seek the truth
Through age or youth
Until the day I die

Because this just can not be
The cold world that I see
Can anyone feel
Is your love real
Or is it only me

Still silence is my reply
As tears well in my eye
I tried my best
And failed the test
So all alone am I

G. A. WEBB


Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-03-14 06:00 PM


Great painful plea almost!! But I don't believe finding someone is a test to pass. I believe we have to find ourselves first, before we can truly love selflessly etc. Pass the test of being a true real person before worrying about the benefits that come further down the track.. Impatience thy enemy..
*hugs*
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2001-03-15 04:25 AM


Wow! Thunderous... seemed like a good word to describe how descriptive and how much feeling is behind your words. Very sad indeed... sometimes it seems as if nobody else in the whole darn world feels like that... but they do. After reading a lot of people's words on this thing, you learn that there are others out there who are hurting and feel the same way. You take loads of care.

~ Tara ~


may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Marian's Lover
Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 15

3 posted 2001-03-15 05:53 AM


Brilliant stuff... just about sums up my life at times. Loved it!

The only guarantee in Life, is Death. - The Lord Buddha

POETIC THUG
Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 42
HOUSTON TEXAS BABY
4 posted 2001-03-16 06:08 AM


Man those were very deep thoughts.You put it into words very nicely.I think it's time that I put some thought into words.Got to get the aproval of the passion's crew!
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
5 posted 2001-03-17 01:32 AM


Loving the wrong person can really screw with your heart and your head...especially when that love isnt returned...but you cant give up...you just cant...ok?

We all have wings...some of us don't know why


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