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Crow's death
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Crow's death |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this one about a character i created. well it's been awhile since i've been on and i figure i should a little before i leave for the ARMY in july. I journeyed unto hell's burning gate Hopeing to find awaiting my destiny's fate. only to find my deceasing soul that I sold, Unable to feel the pain it now holds. Remembering the days when i was unholy and cold. A fool I was to sell my soul for an unreachable goal, cursed like Midas with his touch of gold. Diden't realize my mistake until I had grown old. For when I was young foolish was I, I would kill a man just to watch him die and now with regret i drop to my knee's an cry and try to strive back up that good ladder but the tourment here only gets sadder. I fought the demons and heard the screams with no idea what they would mean until I entered here and saw the firey steam and red evil gleems. Only then did i figure out What they meant A eternity hell spent.... I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Brilliant hon  Isis *War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
You are fiesty as ever (yes, I still want some tips) Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I loved this. Great poem here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice. The last line was awesome.  See you around. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Woo-hoo Jeremiah... you're great at this... write a million more before you leave!!!  Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Wonderfully written...and nice to see you back. P.L.U.R. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
thank you all for your replies. I've been gone for awhile so i've not been able to thank people so now i'm takeing the time to do it I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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