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0 posted 2001-03-12 11:23 AM


Violence is created,
When hope is evicted,

Memories are harden,
With not fragrance or pardon,

Past sinks within inches,
Leaving no room to breath,

Stories have begun to leak,
Never have the future seem so bleak,

Burning of the perfect skies,
Wondering why no goodbyes?



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
1 posted 2001-03-12 12:53 PM


old friend i have been gone awhile but i'm back for a few months before i leave for the Army in July. this poem is great i have see you have only gotton better i will be looking up other stuff that i have missed of yours. keep writing and read some of my new stuff.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


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