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ma miller
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Isis
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1 posted 2001-03-12 06:40 PM


Always you amaze me, I'd love to know how your mind works!! LOL Glad though, you didn't get any more graphic
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2 posted 2001-03-13 01:37 PM


this is amazing,the last part especially was well done,loved it,everything was juuust right!!great read!!

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3 posted 2001-03-14 10:17 AM


The three knocked door...perfect saying. Keep it up.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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4 posted 2001-03-14 11:02 AM


The imagery here was very profound! A great piece!
Very nice work.
~Allan

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ma miller
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5 posted 2001-03-14 07:25 PM


thanks all for reading and appreciating ... i'm of the belief that developing one's individual style relates to more than just the words, phrases, rhymes, meter, etc ... it's about presentation for me ... not to detract from the power of the words, but to reinforce it ... thanks again.
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