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DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2001-03-11 01:35 AM

A little Devil sits upon my shoulder.
Day by day, his little voice grows bouler.

He wispers ideas into my head,
until all reason is gone or dead.

Wonderful adventures he promises to me,
like sailing across an open sea.

But painful lies is all he tells,
why can't I tell him to go back to Hell?

Does part of me like to hear him speak?
Is part of me really that weak?

Do I really like doing things that are wrong?
Do I really like hearing his song?

I guess it must be that I really don't know,
why it is I can't let him go.

Its and odd sort of deal between us two,
and I'm sure he also has a seal worked out with you.

Isn't it strange how we hate what is wrong,
but somehow all listen to that same Devils song?

P.L.U.R.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-03-11 03:33 AM

We all have our weak areas and some we are willing to let go of and some we want to hold onto a little longer and some are quite strong...James

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2001-03-11 09:21 AM

Wow I liked this one--& ain't it the truth-lol

LOVE ELMO <3

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

3 posted 2001-03-11 10:57 PM

I know that Little Devil...also
I can't seem to shake him from my shoulder*S*
Excellent write here*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-03-12 01:44 PM

I have had battles with this devil and prevailed.......I hope to continue my winning streak.
Nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2001-03-12 02:06 PM

a true master piece my friend. it's wonderful to come back and read such great things from a wonderful writer like yourself.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-03-12 02:28 PM

Very thoughtful, but aren't we glad that there's another voice. Our conscience? We need a deaf ear and a wide open one. Joyce

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