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just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2001-03-09 12:28 PM

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~If for only one moment~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

If I had the chance to touch you for just one moment I would take it,
even with knowing the pain I'd feel when that moment ends.

In that one moment I could memorize your face with my small hands.

I could see how it feels to be wrapped in your warm loving embrace.

I could caress your soft skin and feel your heart beat against mine.

In that one moment, if never again,I could percieve the love I believe we share.

and if never again givin the chance to touch you I would forever have the memories of that one wonderful and ever lasting moment I spent with you.

Don't fear failure so
much that you refuse to
try new things. The
saddest summary of a
life contains three
descriptions:
could have,
might h

Zunera
Junior Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 30
Pakistan

1 posted 2001-03-09 03:23 AM

Aplause !!!!!!!!!!!!

Simply amazin ! u know u've pictured the exact scenario I've gone through and that has made me to sit and wait for only one more chance, only one more moment, only one more hug !

Keep up the good work !!!

Love

Zunera

[This message has been edited by Zunera (edited 03-09-2001).]

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2001-03-09 03:55 AM

This is achingly sweet.
I can relate to this ...

Nice work.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-03-09 05:43 PM

Yes and always hoping one moment would lead to another...James

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2001-03-10 09:52 PM

Oh the longing, I feel this.

beautiful

Maree

I may know the word but not say it
I may know the truth but not face it
I may hear a sound a whisper sacred and profound
but turn my head indifferent.

Natalie Merchant

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-10-2001).]

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2001-03-13 03:25 AM

Absolutely loved this

Very haunting... very sweet... very poignant.

Take care.

~ Tara ~

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Just A Woman
Senior Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 507

6 posted 2001-03-13 12:30 PM

You have captured the gift of love. I compliment you!

After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all.

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-03-16 04:29 PM

Wonderfully sad... I defintly feel the longing in this one. It reminds me of a country song, where this guy just wants to be with his love for one more day... but he knows he'll always want another. Great job on this...

Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

8 posted 2001-03-19 12:33 PM

Memories are the lasting results of sharing such "relative space".
The passion of this piece says, you will have many memories.
Good job.

"The poet is the priest of the invisible."
Wallace Stevens

AWood0813
Junior Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 21

9 posted 2001-03-19 01:27 AM

I can relate to this poem right now because it's happening to me. I've tasted my forbidden fruit and now it's gone. And I want it back badly...

Aaron

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

10 posted 2001-03-22 09:44 PM

I love this! One for the library for sure. Take care!

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

11 posted 2001-03-22 09:54 PM

This was simply beautiful*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

12 posted 2001-03-23 01:50 PM

This was beautiful!
You've expressed just how important love truly is. Wonderful job!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

13 posted 2001-03-24 09:36 PM

very heartwarming piece with insight into yearning.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

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