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Dark Poetry #3

A shocking answer

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-03-08 12:52 PM

There was a shake,
Not like any other quake,

It shocked all heaven and earth,
But one remained standing abrupt,

No one knew what caused such a commotion,
One who felt it knew how it was summoned,

Are you familiar with the symptoms of an aftershock?
Many have dealt with it,
Some seemed dazed,
And some were mocked,

Scientist could not locate,
At the point where it allocate,

Religion failed to provide hope,
Leaving one confused on how to cope,

The answer seemed all too familiar,
How come I could not keep lover nearer?

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2001-03-08 08:45 PM

Indeed! The answer has come.. We need to spend each day of our lives LIVING it as though it MAY WELL BE our last!! It doesn't even have to be a partner, start surrounding yourself with people you love, for a little is better than none....
Quite inspirational piece this one!!
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-03-09 04:05 PM

Thank your Isis.

I enjoyed your comment.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2001-03-12 01:47 PM

this is another great poem of yours i have read today. by the way do u still want some tips from me? keep them coming my friend so i have something to read. hehehehe

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-03-12 05:05 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem...James

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