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Jeremy Redinger
Junior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 46

0 posted 2001-03-06 08:23 PM

Here's a poem I wrote a while back... It always struck me the way a good song strikes me, it's relaxing, and when I read it, all my problems just seem to dissapear for a moment. Hope you like it

Glide

Music rides the wind of life,
Let it be your chariot;
Smell the sounds of the rainbow,
Whisper the calling of your heart below your breath,
seek the solution to that which holds no answer
And find one.

Words cannot explain that which is held deep,
they never could, no sight or sound could.
Taste the tears as they roll down your face,
and know their bitterness;
Tears are more than that,
They reflect what is held inside,
Spawned by the very thing that no words could describe.

Hold nothing back
Let it all come out
If you try to suppress it then it shall linger on,
and remain as a thorn in ones heart.
Search for meaning, Search for nothing.
Seek the solution and find an unspoken answer.
Let things make sense and understand the calm,
Know the silence.

Peace, Love the peace.
Peace brought by music, peace brought by silence.
Lay back and feel the words
Lay back and know nothing.

Emotion is never there unless you feel it.
Spewing itself from your heart.
The flow of the waters calm the sea;
The current changes with those who stand against it.

Fall down... Just fall;
and keep falling.
Don't fall, float.
Sink deeper and deeper into the air,
and breath yourself out.
Feel yourself no more
and only what you've become,
one with the sky, one with the wind.
Ride the wind
And let the music take you away.

May 18, 2000
Jeremy Redinger

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

1 posted 2001-03-06 08:33 PM

Yet another great piece of work Jeremy*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

2 posted 2001-03-06 08:39 PM

We share the same feeling about music.
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Peace, Love the peace.
Peace brought by music, peace brought by silence.
Lay back and feel the words
Lay back and know nothing.

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Enjoyed it. :}

~Broken~

Oh God! Why the angels fall first?

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

3 posted 2001-03-07 01:30 PM

You are truly talented.
Thank you for sharing your work.
*S*

mYsTiC

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2001-03-08 01:51 AM

awesome work. Enjoyed it.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-03-08 05:01 AM

Wonderful...reminds me of "Free Fallin"...James

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2001-03-08 03:50 PM

great piece of work here. I like it alot. sorry if I don't sound enthusiastic, but my hands are like ice cubes and they hurt if I type. Byes. Oh, and great job.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

7 posted 2001-03-09 03:58 AM

This does bring a deep sense of calm with it ...
Very nice work here.

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