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Dark Poetry #3

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JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

0 posted 2001-03-04 07:15 AM

The Moment

Do you
Remember me?
I can not,

Smile today.
Or yesterday.
I have not,

Tomorrow’s hope,
Disappears,
In the moment,

I see,
No promise,
No visions,

Illuminate,
My night.
My Love,

I am sorry,
To share,
Only Darkness.

John D LeClare

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-03-04 04:02 PM

John, good poem.
Why two different poems with the same title?
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

2 posted 2001-03-04 06:32 PM

I forgot to change to "subject" line there fore two "times". It has been a long time since I shared anything. I'm very rusty. Thanks for the comments

John

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2001-03-04 08:42 PM

John,
A sad moment, but there will be happy ones again. And anyone that loves you has to be willing to accept US as a whole, the good and the bad...
Sad stuff but good job

Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

4 posted 2001-03-05 11:55 AM

Very powerful with the short lines and stanzas. Enjoyed the read, could feel the emotions running. I love your opening stanza.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

JohnDLeclare
Junior Member

since 2000-07-26

Posts 43

5 posted 2001-03-05 04:46 PM

Thank you for the nice comments. It is nice to be back online again

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