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Dark Poetry #3

Your Scent

Jeremy Redinger
Junior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 46

0 posted 2001-02-28 12:04 PM

Thank you, all of you, for your warm welcome. I really appriciate it. Here's a poem a wrote a little while back I thought you might enjoy... It certainly holds a lot of meaning for me.

Your Scent

Daily life eludes me,
I seek the simple pleasures.
Ones of entrancement,
Ones of emotion.

A cool breeze brushes accross my face
And I am left with the scent of love.
I search relentlessly for the source,
Believing undoubtably
My search will yeild the source of my passions.

Nowhere to be found,
The ominous smell eludes me;
I'm left alone,
A brief summon I have called.

Alas it is gone,
In truth as are you;
Gone in body.
Gone in presence.

I am left with memory,
Deep, Passionate memory;
Memory with such emotionale
That it could only be evoked by a sweet familiar smell.

Missing you with lustful eyes,
With a heart of adoration and unconditional love,
Times come to pass on occasion
When a wish to have you near brings that solemn scent;
Your majestic aroma.

I am filled with what I have longed for;
Memories so real I can almost touch you.
There is the sweet taste,
Your sweet lips pressed gently to mine,
Kissing away my wounds of sadness,
And stealing the dark blood of these helpless feelings,
Of being alone.

[This message has been edited by Jeremy Redinger (edited 02-28-2001).]

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

1 posted 2001-02-28 08:32 AM

Your weaving of emotions has left me in awe.
More...more...of this pleaseeeeee.
It sings.
*S*

deerfawn
New Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 4
Texas, USA

2 posted 2001-02-28 07:44 PM

Well written! Very emotional. I look forward to reading more.

Temptress*Moon
Member

since 2001-01-15

Posts 240
Long Island, NY

3 posted 2001-02-28 11:17 PM

Jeremy
This was absolutely a Wonderful write*S*
I was drawn into reading it more then a few times*S*
Temptress*Moon

I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

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