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qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2001-02-26 01:31 AM

I Just wrote this like 20 min ago(2-26-01-12:56am)--so sorry if it sux--I'm still shaking--me & my Keith just had a huge fight online & now he's gone!)

PLEASE!? (HE'S GONE)

Burning tears,
stream down my face.
Please let me leave,
this darkened place.
Why won't they stop?
When did they start?
Please help me heal,
my broken heart.
Please lift these tears,
from my swollen cheek.
Please help me stand,
my legs are too weak.
Please take this horrid,
taste from my tongue.
Please hold me here,
if I try to run.
Please take the sword,
from my chest.
Please understand,
that I tried my best.
Please let me get through,
the next couple of days.
Please take away,
this gloomy haze.
Please listen when I say,
I love you & don't want you to go.
Please take these words,
because it's the only truth I know!

IT HURTS SO BAD--WILL THE TEARS EVER STOP?
LOVE ELMO
<3

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

1 posted 2001-02-26 02:48 PM

I'm sorry to hear about your fight. In your poem, you make it really apparent that you have strong feelings for Keith, and that the fight has really hurt you. Your words are beautiful, even though they're so sad. I really hope that things work out for the best for both of you. Good luck, and great poem!

P.L.U.R.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2001-02-26 05:42 PM

Thanx that means a lot to me--yes I love him so much-we've been together for 2 years but he lives 5 hours away

--I guess if it is meant to be we will be able to make it through this fight like all the rest--Hopefully--I never stop thinking positive--lol--

LOVE ELMO <3

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

3 posted 2001-02-26 10:20 PM

oh wow~ i LOVED this. even tho it almost made me cry, i absolutly loved it. straight to the library. beaiful poem..excellent read

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2001-03-09 12:51 PM

Yea Thanx DQ--This one definatly came from the heart--my broken heart that is--Actually we have worked everything out (like always) & things r really good 4 the time being--lol

LOVE ELMO <3

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