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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2001-02-25 11:43 AM


Doubt

Beloved---is the pain
Of living, worth the while---
When breaking hearts must mask the ache
With a semblance of a smile?

Beloved, would not sleep be best---
Where oblivion is king,
Instead of facing empty days
And just remembering?


© Copyright 2001 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-02-25 06:40 PM


These doubts are more than justified. Usually it is best not to dwell on the problem, playing it over and over, only leads to pain and or insanity. Beautiful hon, shows your sensitive side even more!!
Isis

*War produces one thing - Cemetaries. And in cemetaries there are no enemies!*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2001-02-26 07:14 AM


Oh Rex, I love reading you
Have been away fro a few weekd,so havent read you much, but am glad I looked out for you

and "Beloved" Love that word, so mcuh passion in it, don't you think?

thank you


Maree

mystic requiem
Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144

3 posted 2001-02-26 12:34 PM


A most excellent poem.
I have read your work before,
and admired it then too.
*S*

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