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moshpit Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 143cebu, philippines |
The quiet dusk retires While the eager dawn awakens. Time to heal wounds of love. Time to patch up broken ties. Time to say unspoken things. Time to move on. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Jeremy Redinger Junior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 46 |
There is so much truth in your words, a part of yourself, a part of everyone. Few can say they haven't layed in bed staring at the ceiling with tears welting up in their eyes... Few can say that there's nothing they've had to work through and get over. It makes us feel good that someone out there knows how we feel, it makes us feel good to read a poem we can relate to. I can really relate to this poem, and I want to thank you for writing it.  |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
So well said. Simply wonderful! *thanx*   |
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